I idea of the story is very original and the words seem to flow but there are a few grammar mistakes. voted. :)
@cookiemonster1234 hmm...who are you and wats the name of ur story i cant find it!
I think the idea is pretty original and I like it!!. But I think the grammar needs a lot of work. Just some simple mistakes. :D
this is reallly good. You have the readers craving more and ure writing flows :) This is GREAT, well done!
guys calm down and im on now to,lol.whens the next update for parable and lara lavender.
@uaidhi I'm in the middle of startin a new fan fix Its the wanted vs. Parade prank war I'm about to upload the first chapter soon so check it out.
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