Under the Influence

Isabelle Hoarde is a bad girl, she never really did care about school and education. When her principal has had enough of her, he sends her to Greg Jefford, the school nerd. As she spends time with him, she starts to open up. Something in which she is afraid to but she can't explain herself when she is around him and frankly it scares her. Past memories are reinforced causing Isabelle and Greg to stick together but could it be too late; could she be too far gone? Could Isabelle uncover the secret that is Greg Jefford? Find out as you read "Under The Influence." (All rights reserved)
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the concept seems very different and interesting. I enjoyed the dialogue. However the spacing was a bit annoying, could to make it closer together?
Great writing, you really pulled me in! There are a few grammatical errors but otherwise the story is great! Keep writing
Hah, that Isabelle is a feisty one! She might not like it now but little does she know she'll fall for Greg eventually, am I right? ;)
Hahahaha nice personality. I love it. But I spotted quite a few errors. I advice you get yourself an editor. :)
I've read the prologue, and I'm looking forward to see where this goes! Good job :)
I love this!:) I think the idea is good and Isabelle seems like a really lovable character, great!:) *voted*


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