I like this. I feels unique and beautifully written! :) There's just something about Sarah that makes more real to me. Couldn't see any grammar mistakes.
I like the cover very colorful and I didnt see grammar mistakes which is good and thats all I have say! Good luck! XD
Great beginning! It flows very nicely and I didn't see any grammar mistakes! I love it! Bravo!!! Voted!
For a sec I thought she was actually in a jail cell..... asian blonde moment... lol I loved the first paragraph. Great vocabulary.
This avery sarah thing is awesome. I'm continuing to read this, just to let you know :).
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