This is amazing your passion and inspiration moves me , you absolutly have a shot at being a celeberty artist , good luck !:)
I love the story but I read "Rena" and I thought you changed the mothers name then I sounded it out and realized you spelt it different to Renee! Lol
Genius lady! If you dont mind can u please look at my new work and comment. Its called BELLAS A MERMAID. EDWARD DOESNT KNOW.
The part where both her parents are vamps does not make sense at all.Vamps can't have babies.At. All.
Rant over. I love it!!!
it's so interesting ;) nice one. Don't mind those Cs and Ds. they don't know what is a good story and not.
i think it's great so far. :) i do have a ? if you don't mind could you space your paragraphs? other than that great work.
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