This kind of makes me wonder about how some authors really are lol. Good plot to it, though.(:
Why would a father kill his own blood? ;'/ ...I'm gonna read more to find out. Great writing you have! =)
Wow really weird and creppy..... whys he killing.....?? &&god you write really long lol but thats a really great thing :)
I think ima keep readin this :)
I love your writing still although your paragraphs are long, but hey that's the way to like to write right?
This guy is crazy. He's in denial. Does he have a motive to kill all of these people? I was wondering that the whole time.
wow. 0.0 What an intense amazing start!! :D That was really good!! I definitely felt thrilled! :D UPLOAD MORE!! :D
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