great story..but what makes it not so great..is the unnecessary cursing words you put in it like u retarded..like jeff
update now before I make you GO TO SLEEP!!! lol just kidding
* Looks at you bloody knife falls and starts laughing like an idiot*
nice check out my story crazy lady my new story My Heart Of Stone. you should update everyday you can get more reads that way.
LOL AWESOME, but seriously spelling mistakes. Fix. Them. LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
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