Also when switching points of veiw, let us know for example *Bobs POV* blah blah blah *Marks POV*
If you need an editor, I would be more than happy to edit your stories for you...That way it may be easier to understand. :)
you need to like tab when another person begins talking, it...I can't read it cause it's really confusing. you should edit it and then I can read it :)
i loved the story but no offense i got really confused reading it but oter then that i am in love with the story
AHAHAHA Shay Spencer backwards is Spencer Shay like from ICarly!!...not that i watch that show err anything..but great strory anyways =]
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