nice description! I also loved this chap and flow of this so voting! and i like the change in scenery in this book
Good start, could be more showing and not telling in herr...and it could be longer. Make it more gripping. (:
PAKKA nice name cole aww he is such a sweety pie and im defs reading on its short but thats why i LOVE IT its just gripped me on CHAP 1 HERe I COME :)
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