this is really good. maybe check out some of my stories. I DON'T DO TIARAS I PLAY FOOTBALL is my story. Heads up it has a mixed up past.
I just adore this story!!! I am so happy that you had God in this story(: it makes me smile cause Im a Christian and I am glad you did this...
Dude you are a really good write I'm may be 15 but I really like these story's and I don't read much :)
@goldie68 dont doubt urself ur writing is amazing. my friends r like ur good at writing and i laugh cuz i think of me compared to u! :D
Amazing. Just amazing. It seems like your being more bold with your stories. I really like it. It looks like this installment will be a tear jerker! xD
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