The Substitute Bride (ON HOLD)

Mary-Jane 'MJ' Parker was a bubbly, attractive and intelligent, 23 year old. She was beautiful, from her overly gorgeous face to her rockin' curvy body, that all girls would kill to have. She wasn't rich or poor, just in between. MJ was grateful for everything and everyone she has and had never once complained about anything. It was her graduation night. The night she had been waiting for since forever. But little did she know that, that night she had been dying for, was the night she was about to lose EVERYTHING. Her one and only remaining loved one, her beloved condo that overlooked the city... Then comes in Eric Valchar. A 24 year old lawyer, voted the most hottest man and top attorney, in Australia. He's filthy rich, wild and a total dickhead. A complete opposite of MJ. After a late night of partying, he runs into Mary-Jane, and being the rich and arrogant snob he was, left her sitting in the cold. He finds her again the next day, sitting outside the front of his house. Telling her to get lost was what he was meaning to do, but then he thought of something else she could be useful for...
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Exactly my thoughts akanae...it should be dean instead of principal...nevertheless i still like the plot of the story.it seems nice n intersting:)
A bit repetitive in the beginning, but you use nice details :) and that man is such a meany ;c I think I'll keep on reading this :)
Poor MJ, that must have been horrible for her to go through.
A great start, I was hooked from the first paragragh.
Keep up the great work, voted.
ohhh poor MJ, i fell so bad for her, the day that was suppose to be the happiest day in her life turn to be a nightmare
Omg, that was like so sad! I feel really sorry for her, & it was graduation; wow :( aww, & that guy in the end. Seriously -.- Jerk! Well written & voted :D!
@TiGurl24 - You are? :) Thanks do comment/vote. But keep going! Read Read Read!
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