Such a touching beginning! You have great flow throughout your story which really makes it easy to read and be absorbed into.
Suspense, drama, I love it! A few comma misplacements, but I think I do that too! (x Great story, very different, not cliche :)
Wow itsso good and I love it. I can't see the banner of ameilia's dress :( Love the book trailer
even if english isnt ur first language, i didnt really notice any big mistakes. this is very good idea...it's interesting.
I saw a few mistakes, but they were commonly made. And for someone with a different mother language, this is very, very good. I am intrigued. Will read more.
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