The Royal Game (Editing)

Two persons. One throne. Amelie never thought her father will betray her. He traded her place as a Queen to a man he didn't know, searching for money. Now when Christian is a King, Amelie will do everything to be the Queen again. It's not so easy since Christian doesn't want to surrender. Can they finally live in peace or their games will cost them? When the War begins, they are forced to fight together to defend their Kingdom, or will something stand in their way. Who will win the Royal game? Amelie? Christian? Gabriel? Or someone else? There's only one way to find out. Let the Royal Game begin!
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Very interesting prologue. The emotions need some work as the flashback ten years ago wasn't too detailed. I like the idea, however. It's unique!
Such a touching beginning! You have great flow throughout your story which really makes it easy to read and be absorbed into.
Suspense, drama, I love it! A few comma misplacements, but I think I do that too! (x Great story, very different, not cliche :)
Wow itsso good and I love it.

I can't see the banner of ameilia's dress :(

Love the book trailer
even if english isnt ur first language, i didnt really notice any big mistakes. this is very good idea...it's interesting.
I saw a few mistakes, but they were commonly made. And for someone with a different mother language, this is very, very good.

I am intrigued. Will read more.


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