This first chapter was great! I loved it, and I know someone called Zane, he is a massive Player too, he always finds a girl and eats her face!
great start, your writing style is fantastic. i will definitely keep reading this.
I've always loved best friend romances, and this one is really great! :) Tou're an amazing writer :) xx
I love this story, especially the first line! Priceless! :D Good luck in the Watty Awards btw :)
LOL. The pick up line was priceless. c; Love the way you started off your story, and you're quite descriptive. c: Voted!
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