This is so interesting and well written! It flows nicely and even thought it is fiction, is has a small non-fictional sense to it :)x
WOW. Sorry, but I'm just utterly speechless right now. You are an AMAZING writer!
The description was utterly unbelievable. I thought you did a wonderful job portraying emotion. I honestly think your cover is so cute. Anyways, voted! (:
Wow, this is really original and desciptive! It's really intriguing and you don't have any grammatical or spelling errors, or if you did, I didn't notice. :)
I usually try to leave some constructive feedback, but all I can say is that I loved this! Great writing, a promising premise, just generally fantastic!
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| Name | C.J. Queen |
| Location | a cold apartment |
| Member Since | Nov 03, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 952 |