am i the only one that feels this kinda rhymed? and its almost as if he was singing his thoughts idk :P
i agree with fanatic08 about Chris' POV. it clicks with Jordan's. n now we know what actually happened before going to Osaka.
Oh my goodness! I loved this! My favorite line?
"Not that I would've minded if she's falling for me."
i loved it...it is awesome...
hope u win...i hope u had time to write the next part too..but its fine...
love chris Pov
Automatic win!! this is really goood :) i wanted to hear the next chapter in it too, but that is ok :D
That was really good, but I would go and proof read it some more to catch grammar errors. I really liked it!!!!
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