am i the only one that feels this kinda rhymed? and its almost as if he was singing his thoughts idk :P
u really are a novelGenius. u actually made me want to hear how Chris' voice is. my gosh. the way u put it, i so want to be holly :P
i agree with fanatic08 about Chris' POV. it clicks with Jordan's. n now we know what actually happened before going to Osaka.
Oh my goodness! I loved this! My favorite line?
"Not that I would've minded if she's falling for me."
This is incredible x) Like, seriously. You've really got Chris down. And how long did it take you to write this? ;) A few hours?
i loved it...it is awesome...
hope u win...i hope u had time to write the next part too..but its fine...
love chris Pov
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