It was a good short story, I like your idea with the whole elf vs. fairy thing. Good story!
very good beginning,, would have liked too see what their adventures together had been.
I love elfs!!!!!!! I couldn't finish because I wanted Freddie to be more majestic and jolly...but your story is beautiful.
can i ask a quick question when you say "fairies" do you mean the small ones or the human sized ones?
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thank you! (:
It was a sweet short story! If you do a sequel you should make it be about their child who is half elf and fairy!
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