This is a story about a boy and a girl...with a twist
You should've said "now you dont want to hurt my feelings or for me to hurt your face do you?"
The Gray Man?
*face palms* If i ever meet a man who has that nickname, I'd slap him...as long as he wasn't still in High School cuz then...I'd go to jail >.<
BUT! This was a great start to the book, now on to the next chapter!
dude you just discribed ma dream man
ummmm yeah uh-huh
i like the names they aren't comon names like bella jacob and edward. keep writing it's really good :) thumbs up!
ah, teen love...i miss those times, um, i like it so far, got me curious, so, i am going to keep on reading it! um, maybe fix the spellings? other than that it was catchy!-XXX
i do not understand alot here i like it but... set up the seen befor..