I wanted him to go far...but not that far

31 Part Story 331K Reads 3.6K Votes
Krissy By babydonahue Completed
This is a story about a boy and a girl...with a twist
You should've said "now you dont want to hurt my feelings or for me to hurt your face do you?"
                                    THE Grayson!  
                                    The Gray Man?  
                                    *face palms*  If i ever meet a man who has that nickname, I'd slap him...as long as he wasn't still in High School cuz then...I'd go to jail >.<
                                    BUT!  This was a great start to the book, now on to the next chapter!
dude you just discribed ma dream man 
                                    ummmm yeah uh-huh
                                    next chapie 
i like the names they aren't comon names like bella jacob and edward. keep writing it's really good :) thumbs up!
ah, teen love...i miss those times, um, i like it so far, got me curious, so, i am going to keep on reading it! um, maybe fix the spellings? other than that it was catchy!-XXX
i do not understand alot here i like it but... set up the seen befor..