Give In To Me

16 Part Story 344K Reads 3.1K Votes
Christinag1227 By Christinag1227 Updated 2 years ago
Andre was bored with his everyday fate. Day in and day out he watched people. What kind of life is this? He asked himself, until he laid eyes on Elizabeth, a beautiful blonde haired vixen Andre had to have. Andre is magical and can appear out of thin air, he will appear right in Elizabeth's begging arms soon enough.
I want to know what he saw, especially since he has this unique gift! Also, it would be great to know in some more detail what the lives of the other teens was like. It feels like you're rushing through the story...
Love how you painted this image for the reader! I can see it in my minde
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it's difficult to make a story but  I think its very easy for you to make like that beautiful story. :-)
Just read chapter 1! I am already  hooked! You are so talented!
Writre for me is awesome but I think it needs more restricted chaptersfor more inrigueness
So liking this its different and always like Angeles demon story but thiS is combo and a love intrest ...reading on