Something Twisted

In the year 2013, a man named James Wright created an anti-ageing pill, gifting the human race with immortality. Now, 100 years later, there is a problem. The number of pills is decreasing rapidly, and without the pill, the entire immortal world will go mad. Annabelle Taylor is mortal. She grew up in a rich family with the world at her fingertips. But now, at 25, when she hears her Father's plan to massacre the entire lower class in order to 'waste' less pills, she has to make a choice. Fight against her Father and risk her life or forever live in shame and guilt. But what happens when the people she tries to help won't listen? And what happens when she she has to make a choice between love and doing whats right?

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I love the amount of detail but i feel like you give away too much for a prologue. Also, you may want to go over punctuation.

FrangarNonFlectar

I really like this idea and am looking forward to seeing it develop.  You woudl really like "The Passage" by Justin Cronin.

belugagirl

This is really interesting, I give you props for coming up with something original. I'd really like to see where you take this, you got yourself a reader!

ProjectxxEden

not a fan of scify but it was beautifully written! and guess wat..... I'm voting! u need to work on dialogue though btw

Struggler

THIS IS WICKED AWESOME!!

Goodness, where is the next chapter?
So interesting and intriguing, I love this. Please write on, I am curious about this book O_o