dang this is like really good! :) awesome description and writing - I could totally get a picture in my head! :)
It would be scary to be the only one living on earth. Alone while it's all complete darkness that surrounds you. Great short story! :)
@Middlest0rm Could I have your permission to write a short story-second part to this? I just got huge, brilliant ideas! ^_^
@Middlest0rm depends on how you want to craft the story. this would be a good short story (one shot?), but it seems like you could expand it if you wanted to.
@Middlest0rm but it's still brilliant. i'm gonna be staring at this page and waiting for the next part to come. don't mind the stalker o.0
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