Your writing style is so professional. And forbidden love is pretty romantic. <3.
This is lovely. I love the forbiden love : ) It's very very good. I enjoyed reading it very much, I think I'm going to add this to my library : )
Are you a pro? I can see why the got an A* :) I love how your descriptions set the scene perfectly! :)
this was really good. a page turner in my opinion i can see why you got an A plus. good job
Get rid of the comma between jet and black. Apart from that, this is amazing. Really, I don't give out a lot of compliments, but I greatly enjoyed your work.
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