I actually know someone named Stephanie Davidson :P it's kinda close to your character's name. Anyways, good storyline!
OMG Spice kinda freaked me out. How Dren (aka Nerd backwards) looked so scary, my 7 year old sister had nightmares about her! lol.
Wow that's really good! Did you get inspired to write that or was it your own idea?
Nice story so far : ) I agree with finnie that you should probably cut the dialogue's line spacing.
oooo sounds really intersting... a perfect human being eh?...that is impossible...but lets see how this story proves me wrong..lol keep writing!! =)
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