My Alpha Mate And My Beta Brother (Completed)

Jessie world was perfectly happy, she was a powerful werewolf, she was smart, she had a beta brother,but no mate, but her world gets messed up when the Alpha comes back from a 6 year trip, what will happen when she finally meets him when hes the super protective jealous kind when his friend wants her in bed, and her uncle tries something unthinkable.....
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The story line is good, but there are a lot of misspelt/misspelled words.  For instance Indipendant is spelt independent.
It would be way better if you fixed the mistakes, because it's hard to understand-and focus-on the plot of you story.
Instead of saying girl wolf, u shuld say she wolf, saying girl wolf sounds rlly human for a wolf thingy
alot of mistakes and for these kids to be alpha's they are very YOUNG and still living at home with mom and Grams huh
Couldn't understand idk if its because of the many mistakes.or what but.I.just couldn't
I like the story, but could you skip the shortening like tbh because it's confusing if your vernacular isn't english. Pretty please! :)


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