I really think u should make this into a story!!! Its really interesting! Please do continue.
I think it was great u Cud carry on wiv it i bet u Cud make it into à really good book i wud defo read it
omg I hope you continue this!! it's so amazing and the plot is already headed off to a good start!!
I love the whole concept of this story and it's so original!! Please make it into a novel??
Please make this into a full story and not just a short one i think this story would be a great one if you do decide to make it longer
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