@JynxBabe ThankZ I have only been writing for like.....A few months so it may not be THAT good :D Anyhow thanks....
OH my gosh eeeeee. He sounds like one hot LUSTAY!!! haha. ; ) and the Names you used they are wicked cool I like them. wonder if they are another launguage?.
Wow I really like the plot to this story !! This has potential to be epic !!! Im gonna read more :)
UI really liked how you started it off, I was scared for her when she couldn't open her eyes! lol.anyway this was well written, good details, & saw no errors
I loved the descriptions, it was really interesting I'm glad you posted this story ahaha, reading on and Voted
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