Library Love

8 Part Story 3.5K Reads 100 Votes
Sarah73 By Sarah73 Updated a year ago
Natalia Breton was always family oriented, aside from her mom. She had few friends, so her littler brother has always been her favorite person in the world. After suffering through the aftermath of a terrible accident, Natalia must come to terms with her life and where she's headed. With a little help from a cute Italian librarian, his friends, and her family, Natalia will become the girl that she knew her little brother would be proud of.
_Dimple_Baby _Dimple_Baby 2 years ago
I found this on ifunny it's a great story. Keep working on it.
lascivioustea lascivioustea 2 years ago
Woooot! Im loving this thing! And its thanks to you since your ifunny post brought me here, haha thanks
MrOCDist MrOCDist 2 years ago
I think you should have gone more into detail and gotten us more involved with the main character. I also feel the title gives false interpretation of the story, but other than that it is amazing and will defiantly be coming back for more.
BatmanLukey BatmanLukey 2 years ago
@madeinalaska woah I didn't think many people from wattpad knew ifunny xD
ImAlittleLost09 ImAlittleLost09 2 years ago
@Sarah73 well I feel that you shouldn't start out by telling the readers her issues. Maybe wait a little bit. I mean when first talking to a person do you tell them your issues?
ImAlittleLost09 ImAlittleLost09 2 years ago
I feel like something off about the story. I can't really get myself into it. Besides that it's great.