Preciously Mine {EDITING}

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zefang By zefang Updated 3 years ago
Life was great for ms popular kahlan carter until her mate,ryder, rejected her on his birthday and humiliate her in front of the whole pack. So she ran away to europe for 3 years until her mother called to ask her to come back as her father had a heart attack.    Now that she is back. What will she do ? Forgive him or not or will fate have other plans ?
@zefang It says miami in first paragraph "im never gping back to MIAMI"
I like it, but the main character seems a bit too egotistical - not a good trait to have, good work though, next chapter :)
Aww i feel bad for her, hope he'll relieze his mistake:P
                                    Everythings pretty good so far<3
@zefang Will do. Maybe you can check out my first attempt at a wolf story. It's called "Twisted Chase." :)
Nice cliffhanger and good intro. I suspect a love triangle??? ;) great job
Interesting. Pretty good. English isn't my first language. I am just writing to improve. Hope all goes well for you. Interesting dialogue! Voted~