Preciously Mine {EDITING}

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zefang By zefang Updated 6 months ago
Life was great for ms popular kahlan carter until her mate,ryder, rejected her on his birthday and humiliate her in front of the whole pack. So she ran away to europe for 3 years until her mother called to ask her to come back as her father had a heart attack.    Now that she is back. What will she do ? Forgive him or not or will fate have other plans ?
hgames113 hgames113 2 years ago
@zefang It says miami in first paragraph "im never gping back to MIAMI"
justsmilee justsmilee 3 years ago
I like it, but the main character seems a bit too egotistical - not a good trait to have, good work though, next chapter :)
ForeverMalak ForeverMalak 3 years ago
aww :( maybe seperate your author's note? I thought it was part of the story otherwise it's pretty good main thing I can tell is grammar but grammar is pretty much what everyone needs to work on:))
xXxWinterxXx xXxWinterxXx 3 years ago
Aww i feel bad for her, hope he'll relieze his mistake:P
Everythings pretty good so far<3
Hooha84 Hooha84 3 years ago
@zefang Will do. Maybe you can check out my first attempt at a wolf story. It's called "Twisted Chase." :)
lydiad55 lydiad55 3 years ago
Nice cliffhanger and good intro. I suspect a love triangle??? ;) great job