Love it. You keep everyone so alive with a sense of humor. You have a unique style of writing which is refreshing. Keep it up.
I would definitely buy ths book you are doing a great job and I've only read chapter one I love the way you ended book 1 and still kept her in it..
i enjoy this story and cant wait to finish it... thank you for shareing your wonderful imagination!!!
Not subtle but funny. You will have to take that out before you hand it in to an editor :)
Hehehe loved the chapter. The kids crack me up and I love the way Ethan treats them..lol Can't wait for more
Very subtle! I loved the end of the chapter. :) Waiting for an upload. And the kids are awesome...gotta love them!
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