Good start so far...the story is interesting from the very start. Good job! Thanks, Laura Heimrich.
i really like the way you swich povs, it helps understand what the characters are thinking!
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I read the first two sentences. So she's only know Adam for a few weeks but he's been helping her move for a few months?
i loved it it had to read it twice tho to kinda undertsand what u were tlking about but i get it now dam i love ur writing
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