Really nice! - like some other commenter's said, it is kind of cliche but that's okay, cliche can be really good! :)
love your summary! it really makes me want to read it, which i did and wow i love it! your descriptions are really good, keep going! :D voting!
Woaaah! Ang cute po ng story mo. Kahit mahaba ang sarap sarap basahin at hindi nakakatamad. Nakakatanggal ng stress. :))))))))))
12 parts huh? That's a lot. But it seems really interesting , and I could see that you've put a lot of effort into writing this. Great job. (:
Interesting! Nice plot! Introduction grabbed the readers so good job! Another good story by you - voted!
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