Hahahaha it's funny, creative, cute, unusual, original, and the joke at the end was very inovative!! :DD
nice story and the joke made me crack up! i love jokes, and i love how you incorporate humor y adding jokes to the end of your story
this story is so funny! to be honest I didn't think it would be that exciting..but its so awesome! I am looking forward to this! also, who is in the pic?
I'm the first who commented! :D Anyway, for me, It's very well written and it's realistic. ^_^ Great Job! :)
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