that was really good. i love it very interesting. it was different to what i normal read. but very intriguing and engaging
This is some real quality work that I'd like to see published. So confused - but in a very good way.
Really intriguing and unique, and I like how it leaves room for interpretation :)
HOLY SH*T THAT WAS EPICCCCCCC
You're an awweeeesome writer
Over and out Sparky :)
This sucks,i wish i knew more details about why his dads trying to kill him and such! Oh well i must say i do love it very much either way :)
So... it's just keeps looping???
His entire life has been so he can tell his younger self the instructions???
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