Andrew Parks' grandfather comes to warn him of an evil plot to have him killed. The only other problem? His grandfather's been dead for the last two years, or has he?
that was really good. i love it very interesting. it was different to what i normal read. but very intriguing and engaging
This is some real quality work that I'd like to see published. So confused - but in a very good way.
Ha! I love this! I was a bit confused but it all makes sense in the end :)
Very cleverly written, I like how it ties in with the start. :D
Awesome!! I love how not all the questions are answered completely, so you still have room to imagine your own reasons and motivations behind the father's attack.  Really well done and thought out! Love the bit at the end too by the way. Very Back to the Future- ish.
Really intriguing and unique, and I like how it leaves room for interpretation :)