You will be MINE. (on hold)
she was beautiful. her long fiery red hair danced in the wind as she laughed, making her green eye's sparkle in delight. she was the picture of a godess. of course the outfit she wore stole some of her beauty but that meant she wouldnt atract other men's unwanted attention. she was just so beautiful. i wanted to rap her in my arms and never let go. to kiss her senseless. the more i thought about her the more i wanted her. and i knew she will be MINE.
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Faith_Hope_Luv
This really awesome! Other than a few punctuation/spelling errors, everything completely draws me in! Just thought I'd let you know. :)
This is great. You may want to work on punctuation but I think that's it. Other than that it's great and I'll definately continue to read! ^-^
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| Name | Angel & Maddi |
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