Riley In The Galaxy (work in progress)

For Jacob Riley a standard delivery isn’t much of a challenge when it comes to smuggling. So when a thief offers him a job to transport her stolen property, it looks like a simple point A to point B deal. As far as he’s concerned its good pay. However when a price is put on his head and his crew by a powerful corporation, his trust is wavered between his loyalties towards the job or saving his crew. Things get complicated when news emerges of his long lost father’s involvement with the goods that are hidden aboard his ship. The situation escalates and he is forced to escape from the ruthless warlord/bounty hunter Randall Crow who may just know everything that there is about Riley. As he investigates deeper while encountering dangers of venturing into the sector of the mysterious Pyrovores, an alien race who prefer not to be interfered by humans and their neighboring alien species, he will have to keep watch on his back and front. Racing against time he will come across different kinds of allies and choices that force him to unlock secrets from his past that will put things in a different perspective.
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Creative, but I think you should add just a little more detail. Change your sentence structure a bit.
Awesome Science Fiction, so detailed and intriguing, and somehow so realistic! And your grammar is great, no mistakes that I could see! Amazing!
This is really good!!!! Your language style is very interesting!! keep writing! :P
Wow! Unique plot and the way you write is amazing :)  you have some grammar mistakes though, but that's ok because everyone has grammar mistakes. :)
interesting but I think some of your paragraph are to long and you need more details around the dialouge
this is pretty cool , the dialogue is great , but maybe if you add some detail that would make it better :)


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Name Joshua Verry Jerry
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