I got so caught up in the story and proofreading that I almost forgot. GREAT story!!!
hmmm, a little more difficult. "machine, knowing all to well". I'm sure see what I'm pointing out but, to be a stickler, "too".
That was kinda spooky:) your details are amazing and your characters act just like normal people and not... Well... Characters:D Excelent work:)
Yet, another intriguing novel I'm anxious to know the outcome for.. Great start, no spelling errors or grammar we're found so great job. :)
I am DEFINATELY reading on and keeping up =)). Amazing word structure and imagery...amazing!
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| Name | Shea Ryhai |
| Location | Wonderland |
| Member Since | May 11, 2011 |
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