this is really good. I agree with the people below me ... i've never been obese but i know someone who has been...
I luv it! Living with obeisty is anything but easy. It looks like a really realistic peice!!
this is how I felt too until this year when I lost weight, I like this hope u get more reads! And lol size zeroes chasing u? Nice joke
This is really good. I love the way you wrote this. Your a really really good writer
this lets others know that they arent alone in how they feel thanks :D good writing to!
this is a new and original way of beginning a story, and it is very real, i do feel you
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