I really love this. It brings up an interesting question because I don't think I could ever do that job. Brilliant I am really enjoying it!
Urgh. What a horrible job to do! I don't think I could EVER do anything like that! Good storyline so far--reading on.
Oh my i don't think i could do her job at all, i am going to read more =) Just a little hint though add more detail it will help your writing alot trust me.
I think it lacked a bit of descriptions..... but it was a very great start! you did a good job! :)
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