The Sting Of Betrayal ON HOLD
"Has your heart ever shattered to a thousand pieces? Have you ever known the heart-wrenching pain of betrayal? Have you ever been beaten down and burned until you can barely stand, until you feel you will pass out form the pain? I have."
After a bad experience that left Him in prison and her scarred, Diane feels that she should never trust. Now, her life is numb, devoid of all emotion as she falls into a state of depression. But will her little sister Shelly and her best friend Danny be able to save her from herself as Diane tumbles into the darkness? Or is it too late for her to be saved? As the figure of her torment comes back to haunt her, will she be able to face the horrors of her past?
*A short story which is rather depressing.*
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theninjaduckie
OOOOH this is so cool!!!!! Epic! I like it a lot :) Great grammar, and really, jsut about everything else. Reading on!
Oh my that was an amazing beginning! It was very poetic and tastefully written :) *voted*
Wow. This really spoke to me. I think many people can relate to the feeling you described here. I know I can for sure. Love it!
ooooh, very good :) I liked how, it kinda felt as if you were talking to the reader, quite original if i say so myself haha.
A very good start, like how you wrote the description. I am totally hooked onto this story(=
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