The Perfect Strange

19 Part Story 59.5K Reads 1.6K Votes
_fantasymotion By _fantasymotion Updated 2 years ago
Lucas and Claryx are a part of two rival races- the Witches and the Wizards. Two magical assassins born to kill. But by a twist of faith, they are brought together, and given an opportunity to right the ancient hatred. But darker forces are lurking through the dimensions... attracted by the call of spilt blood. How can two people, that barely know each other, come together as one? 

However... the faceless oracle has told them this- the only cure is love.
But love is a rare creature... and sometimes, it can't be found in the dark...

This quick read will certainly satisfy your desires for a fantasy-filled adventure. Simply oozing with magic, 'The Perfect Strange' captures the classic tale of men vs women, but with a not-so classic twist...

Read on, and discover a whole new world... that may not be so perfect after all...
Aphrodite041 Aphrodite041 2 years ago
I rather enjoyed that. It was filled with passion, and you incorporate the characters into the prologue as if they were actually real, a great aspect. I definitely like it, and I'll continue on! :)
MyztikalTearz MyztikalTearz 3 years ago
Just an FYI - sometimes when I read & vote for stories on my ip4, the votes don't appear :(
Amirelle Amirelle 3 years ago
Great beginning, though rather rushed.~
I love the ending message. Very compelling. :D
~Ember
wickedrocket wickedrocket 3 years ago
How could I be mean when it was so good. The beginning was so intense and really it was flawless. The plot was amazing. If I have the time I would finish reading this book. You're a good writer :)
charcoalveins charcoalveins 3 years ago
This is a good start. It seems like an interesting idea for a story. I could really feel the hatred between these groups of people. I think that some of your paragraphs may be slightly to long, but otherwise, it was really good.
CookieMonster351 CookieMonster351 3 years ago
I like it, I like the emotion but don't put to much ( it perfect just a head up) emotion or it be a really bad drama cliché book( not that it cliché or anything I love the idea :3 and everything perfect it just a head up.)