This is really good, there are some commas where there should be full stops and saome missing apostrophes, but otherwise, its awesome >.<
@LottieLupinx I mean the secret of her not being human, i wonder if her family knows anything and has been hiding... i'll keep reading to find out!
I really really like this. I love how you describe everything perfectly - but you manage to keep the plot moving at the same time. VOTED.
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