AvaPelayo AvaPelayo 3 years ago
Your story is one of the best stories I've seen so far. Your pacing is wonderful and the writing is amazing. Definitely something I would look forward to read. 
I also love the cover.
MercuryMellow MercuryMellow 4 years ago
you use the word lame to much!!! it's not lame at all!!! ^.^