I like this story; but I wish there was a little more. It reminds me of one of the fictional accounts of life after death in the book "Tales of the Afterlife."
Try again! I'm a Christian, so I don't go along with it, but that was an EXCELLENT story! Keep writing, I really think you're good!
this is the second story of yours i've read... and I'm hooked on you now ! true talent coming from your brain. thank you for sharing =) t
The Afterlife is so mysterious, so many stories can be written about it. This is one of the better ones.
great job! but maybe you should add more, like the characters "life" before he died and if he found his family
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