A Not So Simple Decision
Eleanor is poised on becoming Queen, but has to choose a husband to do so. She has three prospective suitors, but all three come with their ups and downs. She has to make a decision quickly, but whichever one she chooses could destroy the kingdom.
Please note, this is also Fantasy and Adventure. Do not expect a normal Romance. There is far more than that.
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SophieThePenguin
@MelanoraDrood Wow, that's...that's just awesome. o_o Now I'm itching to read haha, definitely going to watch this story now x)
no problem! i just hope it helps, since i go through my works the same and know that alot of times i overdo it, or use the same words as well
This is nice. The imagery is "a-plenty" And overall I actually enjoyed this part. I could see myself reading on. :)
I don't really have anything to criticize constructively whereas it all looks perfecto to me!!
It's very nice. I like the premise. Now it's only up to you how you go on with your story.
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