Wow, this was amazing!!! You got my attention immediately, and I loved how the prologue started with action :D Voted!
Love the introduction! I couldn't stop reading once I started! The action in the beginning was a great touch, VOTED
The writing is really good!! Your descriptions and detail is amazing! Really intruiged to see whats happening next =D
I loved the description and the dialogue. I love paranormal stories, they always give me the chills haha.
This is super intriguing!!! I love your detail and the whole idea seems unique! *Voted*
This was amazing :') I could picture it all in my head! It was a wonderful start and you're a terrific writer! Voted:)
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