I loved it mainly because i can relate. you foot note at the bottem is so true. i am the one begging to be saved...
wow i really like the poem it made me realise how serious suicide really is.
I am literally reading this while in in the hospital , waiting for an ambulance to take me to the mental institute for probation because of attemtp
hmmm... I like this.
But...What if it ended...
Please don't forget.
Guns go off,
the thread breaks,
and I am
I don't know, I felt like the word "raw" was very strong in this piece...and feel like it could close it a little more powerfully...?
Tell me what you think!
This is really awesome and I can really relate to it!! Really awesome job I love it!