Psychosis (Poems)

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Sam Keogh By TheKhaosChronicles Updated 4 years ago
Truly the ramblings of a mad man. These poems are the predecessors of From The Heart, except these come from the mind, but that of a deranged mental patient. Actually, think of me as a deranged mental patient. That shouldn't be too hard. Now you might understand these poems, but it is possible that you never will. It is possible that no-one ever will. But that's just how possibility is.
holy crap. this is SO good. this is truly what poetry is! good job. ^__^
i really liked it and hey read your profile what the heck vampire stories can be awsome but get the justin beiber and one direction comment  they piss me off
                                    but yh enjoyed the poems weird my thing love it :)
Yay Surrealism! It's one of my favorite styles, so i quite liked this. Very interesting and kind of...psychadelic? check out my David L Whittaker, ESQ. poem for something a little like this.
I would probably understand if I knew who the king was (Not that you have to tell me :) Just an observation)
I liked it! This is really good! :) Although I'm not going to lie and say I understood a lot of it, but I liked the tone and rhythm and although I didn't fully get the meaning, it was still cool to read! Great job! :)
that was bare random but I liked it. I was smiling throughout the whole thing :D