John the Ripper

4 Part Story 1.3K Reads 29 Votes
Lizzie/Natalie By Lizzie/Natalie Updated 2 years ago
Autumn Summers was an ordinary fourteen year-old high school girl with an obsession with Jack the Ripper. She wasn't the most popular person at Hilltop, but she didn't really care. Overall, her life was pretty normal until a fateful day that would haunt her dreams for many years to come. 

Trapped in school with a copycat murderer, everything was about to change. Can she find out who the killer is, before she and everyone in the group of fifteen pupils are killed?
I have the book
The mammoth book of Jack the ripper 
It's really interesting and it gives you different theories of Jack the ripper
Really good start! I saw no mistakes! and the cover is awesome!
Very intriguing...makes the reader want to continue...the detail was good, but I could see you writing more detail to capture the audience even more then you did. Great story so far :) xo
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Thanks for the comments guys :-) We're planning to continue the story after Easter so don't worry!
I wanna read it!!! Studied Jack The Ripper last year in history so I wanna see what happens next in your story =D x
The starts good but need to update : GIVE NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE