This was rlly depressing... reminded me of when my parents told me they were getting separated :(
aww :'( thats so sad! Parents leaveing their kids to fend for themselves!! Is that even legal!? loll overall good job. i dont really see any grammar mistakes(:
Lol yes nine does sound like a lot especially to someone who is used to two haha but this is a very good start and I like it a lot :)
@ShadowOfTheDay23 ya, as readers we want a solid reason so u shud probably work on it, but i really like it so far!
i feel sorry for them ... parents getting divorced is really upsetting. :( Good start! I'M SO SORRY BUT IT WONT LET ME VOTE! GRRR!
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