Lost in Darkness
"Suddenly, I found our faces so close together, I could feel his warm breath caressing my face. It smelt slightly of mint, and an undercurrent that was all Cole-pure masculine goodness.I breathed in deeply, my eyes briefly fluttering closed. God, since when did he smell so good?"
Raven has lost everyone. Her mother and twin sister died, her father left, leaving her in alone in the world with powers that she barely understands. All that Raven has left is Cole, her best friend.
When a dangerous enemy resurfaces intent on killing Raven, Cole swears he will do all he can to protect her. As the two get pushed closer together, will their combined powers be enough to save them? Will Raven be able to stop her heart from shattering to a thousand pieces?
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Please keep in mind that this is a first draft, and is, for the most part, unedited. I know it's not at its best, but I'm working on it...
"Wow, I am so hooked!"
"You captivated me from the start..."
"The storyline seems very original..."
The above were just a few of the comments I received... :)
As you can tell, this is also a romance as well as paranormal/fantasy :) hehe
Laura__Zalenga owns the right to the picture in the cover...
Recent Comments
JordanWalker4
HAHA i made a movie poster for my class for this book :) it looks awesome it has Lucius and Raven on it.
OMG i love how u write! I'm not really an OMG type of girl, but I think that was necessary ;-) This is only the prologue and Im already hooked! xD
@midnight-disaster Oh okay, I know what you mean. That's how it is in my story The Watching Game.
This is very interesting. Raven's looks made me thought of the cliche, perfect girl in stories. But this has a very excellent start to the story
This was amazing! You have great descriptions and a beautiful writing style (i'm jealous... hehe) Great job!
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