Aww its so sweet, I wanted to cry. I wonder what happened? Anyway I guess I'll be reading more to find out
I really love the way this is written. Its melancholy, it makes me feel sad when i read it, also very good language when expressing his emotions
I really enjoy your flow, and the plot. I love your style of writing!!!! You got me hooked into the scene!!!
You did a great job with the descriptions of the emotions! Absolotely awsome!! :) liked this very much:) Voted**
i love how you write! :D it's so beautifully written and it's got a nice flow! :) voted!
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