Great opening, really, really interesting. I really like your writing style as well. I'm definitely going to read the rest of this when I have more time.
This was really a chilling chapter, very well written, love, the beginning caught my eyes immediately!! Voted!
I really enjoyed this! It was written very well at kept my interest. I will defiantly be reading more(:
other than the few punctuation corrections, you have a really good solid storyline here! well done!
I like this alot, its like your telling this from an experience you had. its really well written and great imagry :}
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